*考生常见的写作语法错误
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摘要:
为什么*学生在雅思写作上总是丢分?
和英语国家的学生相比,*学生总是会在雅思写作上犯语法错误。
一、句子随意添加
一般烤鸭们写完了一句话之后发现好像少些了写什么,要加上去,然后就出现这样的句子。
There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.
其实很好改,注意标点符号的使用,news后面加了点,就是句子的结束了,然后For还大写,这样后面就彻底成一个句子啦。
改为:There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, andnewspaper.
二、各种前后不一致
说话肯定前面说完了后面得跟上吧!比如:When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
one是第三人称单数,而且have应改为has;want应改为wants, 典型的主谓不一致,要改写的没改写。
改为:When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
三、中式思维要人命
中式化。比如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析:“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本两个句子很正常,但用中式思维把两个句子一连起来感觉就不对了。
改为:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
四、指代不清
比如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
这个句子相当于“我是谁的谁的谁的谁”。*看到就蒙圈了......
改为:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
五、词性用错
这个还要解释么,大家应该经常犯错吧。介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
None can negative the importance of money. negative是什么词性呀,用到这里了,应该用动词:否定,deny!
六、用词不当
比如:The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
显然,把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use(不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use(滥用)”。
七、修饰词错位
英语与汉语不同,放错一个位置,句子的意思就会完全发生变化啦!会造成了不必要的误解。
比如:He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.
分析:better位置不对,应该是 he will know the world outside the world better,放到*后。
以上就是雅思写作中常见的语法丢分处,同学们要注意避免这些语法错误哦!
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一、句子随意添加
一般烤鸭们写完了一句话之后发现好像少些了写什么,要加上去,然后就出现这样的句子。
There are many way to get the news. For example by TV, radio, newspaper and soon.
其实很好改,注意标点符号的使用,news后面加了点,就是句子的结束了,然后For还大写,这样后面就彻底成一个句子啦。
改为:There are many ways to get the news, for example, by TV, radio, andnewspaper.
二、各种前后不一致
说话肯定前面说完了后面得跟上吧!比如:When one have enough money, she can do anything she want to do.
one是第三人称单数,而且have应改为has;want应改为wants, 典型的主谓不一致,要改写的没改写。
改为:When one has money, she can do anything she wants (to do).
三、中式思维要人命
中式化。比如:There are many ways we get to know the outside world.
分析:“there are many ways”以及“we get to know the outsideworld”。原本两个句子很正常,但用中式思维把两个句子一连起来感觉就不对了。
改为:There are many ways for us to learn about the outside world.
四、指代不清
比如:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted her to be her bridesmaid.
这个句子相当于“我是谁的谁的谁的谁”。*看到就蒙圈了......
改为:Mary was friendly to my sister because she wanted my sister to be her bridesmaid.
五、词性用错
这个还要解释么,大家应该经常犯错吧。介词当动词用;形容词当副词用;名词当动词用等。
None can negative the importance of money. negative是什么词性呀,用到这里了,应该用动词:否定,deny!
六、用词不当
比如:The increasing use of chemical obstacles in agriculture also makes pollution.
显然,把obstacles“障碍”,“障碍物”误作substance“物质”了。另外“the increasing use(不断增加的使用)”应改为“abusive use(滥用)”。
七、修饰词错位
英语与汉语不同,放错一个位置,句子的意思就会完全发生变化啦!会造成了不必要的误解。
比如:He believe him can do it well and he will better know the world outside the world.
分析:better位置不对,应该是 he will know the world outside the world better,放到*后。
以上就是雅思写作中常见的语法丢分处,同学们要注意避免这些语法错误哦!
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